Camp writing - Eportfolio

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework
• Effective peer checking and feedback

On Camp my favourite part on camp was the water hole because it was cold and deep. There was about 4 rope swings and 1 tire swing.

I didn't like the river walk because we barley got to go into the water and the walk took about 2 hours long and it was tiring.

Tree climbing was fun when you did solos but when you did it with other people it was bad , because if one person wanted to get down we all had to get down. My record for climbing to the top was 48  seconds.